Friday 18 April 2008

Mai Ban Panatang Urr Jaon

Mai ban panatang urr jaon
Kisi kay bhi hath na aon

Taroo kay des chali jaon
Phir lot ker kabhi na aon

Ye jahan to hai bara zalim
Bachoo is say aur chup jaon

Detay hain log sab dhoka
Logo say dil ko mai bachaon

Rahay rishta na koi taluq
Sab choor choor chali jaon

PS: I guess this is too much to ask. Seems like a 'death' wish. Let's see if i can get this fulfilled in my 'life'. ;-)

3 comments:

Kashif said...

Assalam-o-alaikum Monazza,

I hope you are keeping well.

Nice poetry:)

But

Your wish seems portraying your selfish sentimental condition.

Hope you wouldn't mind:)

We should devote our heart and life for others as required from a good Mauman/Maum'na.

So make your life useful inseatd of going for almost a death wish.

I love Gladiator movie coz it gives message that "
Live such a great life that everybody love to see you once & Die such a way that everybody cries after remebring you."

Best for now.
Kashif

Monazza Talha said...

Walaikum Assalam,

Nice message from the Gladiator movie. Wish everybody can do that, especially me.

As far as being selfish is concerned, well it comes naturally to me since i am a human. I try not to be, but occasionaly i cant't help it.

I also know that merely 'wishing' for death does not kill anyone. hehe ;-) And i am NOT suicidal. So i guess i would be around to bug everybody for quite some time. ;-)

In all this bugging if i am useful to anyone, that would be great :-D

-Monazza.

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